That demo is indeed very cool, you've made a really good job on this so far, identical as far as I can tell, except that it doesn't exit properly when you press space. When you press space in the original, the bar fades out and the logo drops down the screen, and that would be part one finished!
I am not sure what Stormbringer would think about having just one part of a seven part megademo? I guess that if you can just finish this part it will be ok as the other bits can be done seperatey?
We don't have any C64 things on Retro Remakes yet and it's about time we did.
Here's hoping that you can fix the exit when the viewer presses space