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Title: [Music] "Day after day"
Post by: Hezad on October 05, 2008

Hey :)

Well, I'm more comfortable with folk, jazz and rock but I wanted to try something else in my "musical musings" .. Don't really know how to describe it though. This time, there's not any demo inspiration (excepted maybe the drums, idk ...) and it's way less electro than both previous songs I posted here.

Here are the lyrics :

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It's a dark room with dirty windows,
Teared up curtains and dusty ground.
And there are two eyes cherishing blurred horizon
Day after day, and then seasons.


   Time goes and appear wrinkles on that face ..
   Hazy shadows, old widows.
   Time goes and so do your close friends called by Death.
   Hazy shadows, old widows.


This morning announce a good day :
Sun is rising, as your eyelids.
But something's wrong with those rays,
Horrible feelings, horrible dreams.

"Who are you to tell me how terrible are my dreams ?
Am I just a quaint thing on the way to loose its morphemes ?
My friends are off, or will be, but that's a logical suite,
And while i'm speaking, you're still focusing the waves on my skin !"


   Time goes and appear wrinkles on that face ..
   Time goes and so do your close friends called by Death.
   Hazy shadows, old widows.


Here we are, nobody's behind the pane anymore.
He's gone.
He were waiting for this day, everyday, on a wooden chair.
Day after day, day after day, day after day  !

It's a dark room with dirty windows,
closed curtains, no light inside.
And there are two eyes cherishing blurred ol' photos
Just for this day, when grandpa' died.


   Time goes and appear wrinkles on that face ..
   Time goes and so do your close friends called by Death.
   Hazy shadows, old widows.

Oh, since my english is faaar from perfect, don't hesitate (read "please tell me" :) ) if a sentence or an expression is a bit wobbly. Idem about the prosody and the intonation.


Download (OGG) : Day after Day (http://narky00.free.fr/Day_after_Day.ogg)


It's not really exploitable for demo purposes, but anyway, you can use it if you want. Consider it as licensed under Creative Commons (Attribution/non commercial).

http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/2.0/fr/deed.en (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/2.0/fr/deed.en)



edit : song tagged

Title: Re: [Music] "Day after day"
Post by: benny! on October 05, 2008

Awesome and great tune. Congratulations. Very well
done.

From the music/instrumental side it would fit on the
soundtrack of the movie The Beach IMHO.

Keep it up  :clap:

Title: Re: [Music] "Day after day"
Post by: Shockwave on October 06, 2008

What Benny said.. And the first verse reminds me of my bedroom.

Title: Re: [Music] "Day after day"
Post by: Hezad on October 06, 2008

:D thanks a lot to both of you !

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the first verse reminds me of my bedroom.

Maybe it'd be the good time to clean it up ^^