I think alot of people are on their holidays, judging by the amount of people roaming the board.
Im a bit pre-occupied at the moment, so I cant be of much use, but maybe if I can manage it before November, I'll let you know via pm.
Im presumming that you havent been coding long DrewPee dude, for your first prod it isnt bad at all.
One suggestion I have, is to use a bigger font for your scroller at the top. And see if you can add a sin & cos motion to it, experiment, if it doesnt fit the style then no harm in trying. You may also find a text writter around here.
Cheers,
Clyde.